ChocolateMoonLight

Well, it's her father and glad you liked it....

This poem is inspired by a girl I knew who ran away form home, I don't know if she did it for the right reasons or not. This is just ...

Hey! Great work with the poem, I really liked it. I loved the way you described her, the color of her hair, the way she was smiling, the way you ...

“Hey! Mr. G, how are you?” I asked optimistically, entering the white room and sat on the white plush leather office chair that Mr. G gestured towards. “Nick told me ...

IT'S BEAUTIFUL. There are the only words for what I've just read, it's a really beautiful story. The way described the character's, the things that they were going through. The ...

As the girls’ saw me coming near, I can swear the look they gave me, undoubtedly reflected their feelings about readily wanting to kill me.I bet they saw the smile ...

I liked it, but I'll just say one thing- Please check your work a dozen times before you submit it! I'm just going to point out some mistakes... ...were willing ...

Hey! Well, I never introduced myself. So, here it goes... I'm a fifteen something, stupid and moody teenager. I love reading and writing, for that matter. I love my treasure ...

Hey! Ankit. It's good. Witty and funny in some places, and it belongs there. So, that's good too. There are some grammatical mistakes which I've pointed below so you need ...

I was tired, I was frustrated and I was lonely. My legs were hurting and I did not have a penny in my pocket. I’m really alone, without any idea ...

You were standing in the shadow, Gazing at the illuminating stars. Your face was filled with grief, And my heart was filled with abhor. I did not know who you ...

You really did a fabulous job with 'Winterland'. I don't know about others, but I think you should finish it here, its short and to the point and it's really ...

I love 'Writers Block'. It's imaginative, defined, beautiful and really really great. The best thing about this is your actually using something which initially was stopping you. I love the ...

hey! I love your poem. It's also my story in so many ways, my family is also deprived of my attention, I watch less and less T.V. everyday, I never ...

hey! Fakebook is quiet interesting and intriguing. It's very different from anything I've read recently, so I for one would definitely be waiting for the the next addition to the ...