ChocolateMoonLight

Moon is a bit cynical, watching the chaos around. Her right hand reaching the inside pocket of her jacket, her slender fingers encounter the cool surface as she slowly pulls ...

Hey Ollie! (I can call you that, right?) Review done!!! :-)

Hey Oliver! Moon here to review as you requested... First things first, I really liked your poem. It had a nice feeling to it. I loved your description, it was ...

joshuapaul, where did you get that avatar, from the stone-age?

Audy, done!!!

Happy birthday, I am quite right twenty having been cursed for this latter decade to share a date with terrorism, but no matter how long I sit and stare and ...

Review Bar is OPEN NOW!!! Fill in your requests. Hey! Guys So as the forum says I'm here to review all your requests. Anything you want... (only from the topics ...

Moon walks in with bright eyes expecting a new experience. She looks around and... "It's gonna be on of those days, huh?"

Hey! Jash Please review this- It's the edited version of the new novel I'm working on, about which I was talking to you earlier... Thanks!!!! -moon-

Hey! Really great. This was so hilarious... I've read the original book and I too had a 'Twilight Crazy' phase and after obsessing over the original one, when I read ...

Hey! Rahul sorry to review this late, but I'm here now... l'm really disappointed by this chapter. When I read the edited version of the first chapter I expected this ...

I posted the first story I wrote on YWS and this is what I get. Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 7. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 67. I really need to do something. ...

Hey! Guys so sorry for a sucking first draft. But I heard somewhere that if the first draft sucks, the second draft will be even more good than expected!!! I ...

When you have tons and tons homework left (when I say ton I literally mean tons) and tests and you still can't help but go on YWS and check if ...

Hey! Guys and thank you to anyone who took their precious time and read my novel. I'm even more grateful to the people who even reviewed and critiqued it... :) ...