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  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Free

    Welcome to YWS! Really enjoyed this- tired to write a review but 1) There weren't any mistakes to point out 2) I can't put into words how nicely this all ...

    Aug 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Did You Miss Me?

    Glad you liked it! That's for all of the suggestions, this really helped. Still having a bit of trouble with the formatting, even with the directions you gave me, but ...

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: School

    Thanks!

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Thank! Glad you liked it

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Thank! I'll take a look at the one line and try a few different 're-wording's

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    More like liopleurodon but yeah

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Thanks! :D

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Thanks! I'm on a friends computer right now but when I get back to my own laptop I'll look over the 'to be quite blunt' and try to find a ...

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Thanks! ;)

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Wall

    Aw thanks!

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Geniturams- Part Three

    Aug 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Five

    AHHH YESSS (Btw- thanks for adding a catchphrase because I've read a bunch of doctor who stories where they're like 'he had dark hair and a coat on' and I'm ...

    Aug 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Rose

    Glad you liked it! I have a few poem in the making so I'll try to get some of them wrapped up so I can publish. (Thanks for the suggestions ...

    Aug 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: School

    Thanks for the review! I added a few more minor mistakes like you suggested and I'll keep an eye out for places where I can add more. (Having a bit ...

    Aug 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: School

    Glad you liked it! (Love your avvie)

    Aug 15, 2015


I write because I don't know what I think until I read what I say.
— Flannery O'Connor