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(I was just scanning your review, not wanting to repeat too much in my review but...) 'propose' implies marriage in America too. I was a bit confused on that line ...

Sorry I forgot to tag you! Thanks for the review though!

Thanks! I've been writing '"Bla Bla." He said' For most all of my life then I learned a month ago or so that I've been completely wrong- I've been trying ...

Thanks for the review! (I've made the edits on my original document, it might take me awhile to get them up on here)

Thanks! I actually have a few WIP poems on these topics ;)

Hey! Thanks for the review! I can see your point of view on the 'whiney' part. A bit confused about 'Okay, cool, you don't feel like this is the right ...

I use safari quite a bit too ;)

Thanks for the feedback!

Hey! Okay so I have a tendency to be out of the loop- What's with this whole 'dirty knees, cloudy skies' trend? I've asked a few other people and apparently ...

(Oh hey, quick question) So was it specifically the word 'assuming' that felt repetitive or just the whole concept of 'but not if-'

Thanks for the review (first one with actual critique) and the 'a right' was a typo'

Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm kind of thinking of the more minor issues the groups mentioned are facing today. Although there had been improvement (Legalization of same-sex marriage, taking ...

Looks great! (Watch out for this line though "We had a history, yes that is true" The 'is' should be a 'was')

Ahh thank you so much for this I get a lot of reviews filled with nothing but praise, and sure it's nice and all, but it's also nice to hear ...

Thanks for all the feed back? I tried re-writing that one stanza. Thoughts? (I won't be able to edit it until much later- about to go to school)