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Re: L.O.V.E= Fail!
Thank you so much for your reply :) Yeah, it's my first poem so I think there are a lot of mistakes but guess you fixed them for me :D ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: L.O.V.E= Fail!
Hey, this is just a written poem and I just wrote it when I was in a mood :) It's my first one I'm writing. I've written 3 before I ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Mimi (the one I love)
Oh My God! How do you write such ROMANTIC Poems :O ♥♥♥ I hope Mimi will always be your's!! How you express your love for her ... It's just wonderful. ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts
It's Lovely written !!! All I can say is you've missed question marks (?) in these Lines... : Corrections: 2nd Stanza: Are you standing still Watching life in motion? 3rd ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Lame Girl's Crash
It's a very nice poem And you've really explained the girl's feelings... Only thing you need to fix is your construction of sentences. That's all you need to work on. ...
Aug 21, 2011