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Okay, these covers are for the contest 'Dreams Tell Lies' by IcyFlame! :D Took part in it and just found these interesting pictures from internet and edited and texted :) ...

Hi Temi :) Here's as you requested :D You're story is just as much as you're trying convey a message like my story 'The Story Of Casey's Life' :) It's ...

Hi Alliaaryn5665 I think you're poem is quite... Well, all I can say is it's just 'ALRIGHT' Not Good, Bad or Excellent. It's just.. A pass mark I guess if ...

Hi there Jolene :) You see, you're poetry has many mistakes for a short poem like this one. First that you have to learn about poetry are that : 1) ...

Hi Cailey :) You're story was beautiful and a little confusing. By the way, I cannot be harsh. Don't know why =P Okay so there are just tiny mistakes. I'm ...

Okay Guys! Surely, this ISN'T my best :O And I so feel bad about it but I felt really pity for girls who die to the short story which I ...

Brrr... Okay, here's my review as I requested. :) I thought the story was good. Prologue's fine but I guess you've made a lot of GRAMMAR mistakes. Boy, this Prologue ...

@ Beast: Well.. Thanks ! :D @ creativityrules: Oh... I see. I know, and I'm not telling your opinions are wrong. I'd love to hear everyone's opinions :) and Thanks ...

@McMourning: About the Math Sum thing.. I tried to remove it when i put up on YWS and each time i click 'edit' it keeps coming like 'Error on page' ...

@ Jasmine Hart: Thanks. It did help :) By the way, 'Things we clay' is mean't like you clay(put it together) the memories of how you and friends shared. That ...

Hey, everyone. I hope you like this one :) It's about 'Friendship' and each paragraph gives a different meaning of what I've experienced in My life about Friendship :D This ...

Soxx :D It's me again :) 'Alone' was really a powerful poem I thought! You expressed it wonderfully! I'm still confused with this part: "And 'sorry' carved on the arm." ...

Hey Soxx :D Awesome Poem you have here and I see you really have done a Good Job! xDD Everyone loves it but iLoveMore ^^ ♥♥ Only think is that ...

@ harshita3chaarag: Thank you so much. It really helped :) Yeah, sure! I'll work on my stanzas. Thanks for helping me :D

@Justtrying - Thank you Soxx :) Yeah, I thought my poem was a little cliche but then was like 'Oh whatever!' and then I submitted it :P Oh! Right! "you're" ...