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  • Other Poetry Re: Life in my ice-cream salad.

    Soxieee xDD I didn't have any other poetry to review so I'm reviewing this one! :) I thought you're life was Chocolate? :P Anyway, you're poem was cute and wonderful! ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Spooky doodles

    Hey! :D The doodles are fantastic! xD I can't believe you drew this during maths class and that too so well! ^^ And really when I saw this, believe me, ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Open Sea

    Hey YouWishYouHadThis (Funny Name) ;) Anyway, I LOVE THIS! Though very disappointed that it was very short piece :) One thing I found wrong. This is the poem you wrote: ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A teenage thing

    Hey :) Lovely written poem you got there! But, you see, you really got to work on you're capitals! :S Abilities of the poem: *Amazing Poem. *A meaningful Poem. *It ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Waves of Death (see spoiler)

    Hello Xreigon! Waddup? You're poem is so touching :') And you know, the title 'Waves of Death' is good :) It's pretty challenging and goes with the poem. Keep it ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Are You Listening?

    Hello creativityrules :) Nice Poetry. It was Dramatic, Narrative and helping the world to be a happier place =) Especially the 'Shh. Listen. Can you hear that?' Suggestions: #1: Shh. ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Secret Morning

    Hey Cammie! xD Waddup? ^^ I think you need to work on the stanza. But it was Lovely! :D Corrections: #1: I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: You're Beautiful

    Hey :) Lovely written. It touched my heart. You should write more Romantic Poems ;) Now for the corrections: #1: You had me with, two words, two words. Why are ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Are

    Hey :) I think this poem is great! Love it! ;) Anyway, I think you're awesome and you should keep writing :) And the poem's really powerful ^^ It made ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Disney Drawings

    Hey Peanut! Wadduupp?! :P Anyway, I can never draw well like you but I can surely judge it well! I must say they're fine. Here are my suggestions: Picture #1: ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi there!

    Hey! Waddup? :P Follow me! xD I shall follow you too! You quite have a lot good interests there big guy! ;) Good! Like writing? Best website to submit it! ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: emotions

    Hey Radiatelove23! :D Well, I think poem's fine but a little confusions here and there. I find myself sitting in the dark my door is locked- "My door is locked" ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi there :)

    Hey Fred! Welcome to Young Writers Society and is popularly known as YWS ;) It's good to see new writers around here and we're really looking forward to review you ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: On the Wind

    Hey ;))) I think this poem is awesome! :D A very meaningful poem and it does slip away from our hand within a blink of an eye :S Anyway, the ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Heyy !! First of all, Welcome to Young Writers Society popularly known as YWS! :D It's a fun website, very addicting and I must say, friendly people. We'll always help ...

    Aug 28, 2011


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