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  • Art & Photography Re: a little summer love

    Hey! I hope you are enjoying in Young Writers Society! :D Well, I should say this photography is BEYOND awesome! ^^ It looks great! ;) I love how you imagined ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Missing You

    Hey Jolene! ^^ Your poem was good but you missed out some things that has to be corrected. :) Your poem: You're in my heart so strong and steady, like ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Death

    I'm sorry for the guy who drowned near you're house :S R.I.P to him too :) I found your poem very touching :') It was very powerful and meaningful. I ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi!

    Hey Shad! Welcome to Young Writers Society also called YWS! :D I'm Lakshmi but you can call me "Cookie" :) I'm the same age of yourself so if you want ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Art in 10 minutes

    Hi! Glad to know you posted something on the very first of the week you joined! I'm proud! ^^ Are you really sure this is a '10 min art'? Because ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dancing with the stars

    Hi Deanie! Your poem was beautiful but a little confusing. Your poem consisted of fully questions. At least for me. Not exactly FULLY questions but then as I kept reading ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stone Cold Eyes

    Hi Snikkia! Good Job with the poem :) I loved it but I still don't get the meaning of the poem. You say 'Stone Cold Eyes' but then you talk ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just another broken heart in the sand

    Hey BlondieMissyAngel! I know I'm late to review but I found this poem very touching and the title distracted me a lot and I couldn't afford to read and leave ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime Drawing

    Hey UnknownLover! xD Now, it's my turn to review! :P Buhahaha!! Joking! ^^ Anyway, I guess you gave a good effort in drawing but not to be harsh or anything, ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: All Tolerated, Now Peace.

    It is half true of what happened to me. I was in a bad mood and was writing it down. Suddenly when I finished it, it was quite something I've ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Life through Darkness...

    Hi everyone! This is a poem about life when it follows darkness. I've experienced it and I think many other's have too! Enjoy the poem! :smt002 Life through Darkness... Life. ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Window

    Hi again YouWishYouHadThis :) It's a very nice poem but I think it so repetitive! >.< That bugged me so much! I mean each line I read it becomes so ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The Official "Omg, I got my name changed!" thread

    How do you contact the administrator? :S I kind of new so I pretty much don't know all of the stuff. Some one please tell me? :)

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Random drawings

    Hey Twinkle! :D I'm here to review you today just as you gave me the link! Thank you for that!

    Sep 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My True Best Friend :')

    Right! So, this story is based on a True-Life Story of me :) I wanted the world to know about our Friendship and there are no changes. It really happened ...

    Sep 1, 2011


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