ChocoCookie

Hello Maria! :D First, Welcome to YWS! =D I hope you are enjoying the website. :) As a beginner, and me as a reviewer, I must correct the mistakes so ...

Hi Payne! :D I must say, this is a picture beautifully painted and drawn! ^.^ Must have taken a lot of effort into it, so I'm not going to be ...

Hi Twinkle!

Sindhu! :D Man, I told you in class about the "I's" remember? :O And I also re-wrote it for you. :P Anyway, good try. :D Keep Writing. xD -- Lakshmi.

LORNA!

Hey Lorna! :D Cookie's here to interview! :O I see you've observed really well. :) This is a really good poem for beginners but I have to also say that ...

Hey Atticus. :) Good poem you got there but I guess the title isn't much related to poem, though. :S Sorry to say that. >.< Just tiny mistakes which you ...

Hi beautyOFwriting. :) Nice poem but I guess they are lot of mistakes to be corrected. The blue markings will be your mistakes and the red markings are the corrections. ...

Yes. My latest poem! It's been a long time since I wrote. It's one of my talents and I wouldn't spoil it. Would you? xD Here's a poem where I ...

Hi GeeLyria! :) First of all, VERY CUTE AVVIE!

Cell phone photography? Really? Hard to believe! This is really amazing! :D

Hi Maki-Chan! :) This poem is the most wonderful and touching I've read. :') No mistakes, no punctuation corrections, no rhythms off... It's just perfect! :D Must publish! :O Cheers, ...

Hi Shiney! :) I'm here to review you for today! ^.^ I want to say that this poem is really interesting and a good topic :) Makes us know how ...

Aku! Okay. So, the poem was good but to admit, it was a little confusing. But the good thing is that it was different! :D something I've never read & ...

I Am Speechless.... :') Great Job Soxxiee!