ChloeJoelle

This poem is very beautiful. It's harsh, but so meaningful and well written. The style is very cool too. It is so interesting, because I feel like the short length ...

Amazing and soooooo sad. This is such an excellent example of great writing. I love how abstract the title is, and the beginning ties to the end so beautifully. I ...

Wow! I love this! Very intriguing and well written. This is obviously a poem, but there is a very strong story in it as well. Fills you with satisfaction to ...

This poem is so heartfelt and real. I really like it. The last verse ties it all together so perfectly/beautifully, it makes me smile (though it is supposed to be ...

This is SO accurate. It's kinda scary; how many have you read? ;) Anyway, I think you did an awesome job on this. Really. I love number 15: hilarious. And ...

Ha! Love this! Since you are asking for suggestions, I think that the 4th verse could use a little work on the flow. Maybe something like: she buys me so ...

ok, so you're good at writing. (See what I did there?) Anyway, I really like your poem. It is truly from the heart and I can feel the pain which ...

Wow, this is so true and well written! I really like your poem, Biluata! My favorite part is: a perfect robot you shall be. It's so awesome! I also love: ...

I really like this poem. I love how abstract and heartfelt it is. I would read more. I like that you made the choice to not really finish each line ...

This is fantastic! Really great job, JoeDeF! It is short, but very meaningful. I really like that the title is said twice in the poem, both times it's really well ...

Wow. So much was said in this short-ish poem. It progresses BEAUTIFULLY and you can see how upset this person is, yet they are kind of at peace with it ...

"but he still did appreciate my own sarcasm." Did you mean 'didn't'? just wondering. I really like the description of Roxanne (she had midnight blue eyes, light blonde hair, freckles ...

Wow, Dracula. This is amazing. It is so real, and the relationship between the characters is incredibly sweet. The story is so heavy in the beginning, and I could so ...