ChloeAB

Thank you for your help! I will edit this! :)

Thank you so much for your feedback, it's super helpful and I'll work on those points, especially the start, I was wondering how to improve it, thank you!!

Welcome! :D

I don't know what's happening but it sounds absolutely brilliantly exciting and I love it. I love the way you built enigma and mystery in this was really effectively and ...

Hehe, I thought so :) It was good though, keep writing!

Thank you for the advice and reading it back I can see how those bits need to be changed, thanks!

Hiya! Yeah I split it because I thought it might be too long! Thanks again for your advice on this part and I will of course notify you when the ...

Thank you for your comments! I'm going to go back through my piece and revise it with these in mind :) Thank you!

Thanks for the review, your points are really helpful, I shall review my piece and take your advice on board! Thanks again! :D

Haha, it's cool! I really enjoyed reading it ^_^

You're welcome! I did :)

Thank you so much this means a lot to me!

Thank you! I feel so welcomed here, haha. Your advice is really helpful, I plan to edit it tonight!

Thank you so much for your reply! I will re read it through and make the changes! Thanks again!

Thank you so much, I didn't really have any confidence in my piece so I'm really grateful, this means a lot! Chloe