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Chirantha

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Samodiva

    Hey there Stela, Well, I'm impressed by your writing style. It showed your creativity and your skill in writing. But I'm mostly impressed by your word choice as it shows ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Battle Of The Hopeless (Prologue - 2)

    Hey Polink, Sorry for my late review. Let me make it up to you. Ahh... the scientific narration makes a come back. I like it, and it's for the same ...

    Dec 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Battle Of The Hopeless (Chapter 4)

    Hey there, I know, I know, it took me a long while to review this, so please forgive me. :D Firstly, I really like the connection you made between the ...

    Dec 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Too Close To Home

    I know, I know, I'm late... well fourteen days late for the review in fact. Let me make it up for you. Before I get into the story itself, I ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Angel Harrison

    Hey there, Sorry for my lateness, but let me make up for it by this review. Well, that was a unique approach to writing a story. Using a child's perspective ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cold Night

    Hey there Polink, I'm so sorry for my lateness. Please forgive me. Well, I'd say it was a good poem. You showed the emotions well, and it was quite thought-out. ...

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Behind The Mirror

    Hey Kitty15, I'm really sorry for my lateness, but I'll try to make up for it by this review. Wow, that was both spooky and creative. I mean, I didn't ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Seed Chapter 3 Part 1

    Hey there Stela, I meant to review this sooner but life got a bit busy. But anyways, here I am. Hmm, the plot is getting even more complex and interesting. ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Serpent's Teeth [2]

    Hi there Twit, Sorry for my lateness. I intended to write this review earlier, but got overwhelmed with school work. Sorry again. :) Hmm, interesting. I like the way you ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]

    Hey Twit, Sorry for not reviewing this earlier. I was busy with some school work. Anyway, let me begin the review. Ahh, Frankenstein. I'm assuming this is the Dr. Frankenstein? ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pie Rats

    Hey Audy, Sorry for not reviewing this earlier. I was a bit busy the last few days. But, here's my review as promised. I find no mistakes, but here's one ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Seed Chapter 2 Part 2

    Hi there Stela, Ahh, comprehension dawns to Cordelia. Finally we are getting to the good stuff. I'm kidding ;) But still the chapter came to me by surprise because I ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Puppet Master (New Version)

    Hi Searria, Hmm, a very different story from the ones that I read, but it was interesting and also mysterious. But at the end, I had but one question. "Why?" ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Battle Of The Hopeless (Chapter 3)

    Hi Polink, Ahh, now the plot is starting to make a lot more sense. I did have a hunch before, but now it's all clear. At least, up to this ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Battle Of The Hopeless (Prologue - 1)

    Hey there Polink, I'm surprised at the approach you took in this chapter. It seemed, hmm... what's the word I'm searching for, unique but also concise in telling only what ...

    Oct 15, 2011


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