ChinaCookie

Thanks all for the great reviews and all the great advice. It is really appriciated! hope to hear from more of you and thanks amillions to those who have already ...

Eyes briefly meeting Hands sliding down my back My heart pulsing rapidly This angle of attack LIps touching abrasively Bodies demanding passion Words whipered with desire And meaningful passion With ...

Hi There I agree with the comments of the others on not grasping the concept but yet i caught the idea of what you were writing. I maybe got a ...

hahahahahaha i wonder who that friend was!!!!!!!!

Hi Short yet very expressive and i found it very captavating! you seem to be a very deep expressive write and i like that. Hope to hear more from you! ...

Hey there :) i REALLy enjoyed this poetry it is amazing piece of poetry.. Everything seemed to fit perfectly together and made such great sence.I reallh hope you carry on ...

hi there im China Cookie Well this is not technically a poem but it conveys alot of emotion and i gathered you might have alot bottled up emotion and i ...

Hey there I'm China Cookie Your friend seems to be an amazing poet. This poem is absolutlety GGRREEAATT!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading it and it has a true meaning to ...

You give to me hope, And help me to cope, When life pulls me down You bring me around. You teach me to care, And help me to share. You ...

Hi there I'm China Cookie. WOW is one of the many words I could use to Describe your poem. I like how you used "i love you" at the vbeggining ...

hey there I'm China Cookie. I just want to start by saying my poems are new and I,m not that great yet,but i will help where i can. Your poem ...

Hey there everybody... Thank you so much for your Great advice and your Awesome comments!

Hi there I'm China Cookie. How this makes me feel...makes me feel how I've felt most my life and yes all you have said is true

Hi there I'm China Cookie. Well when I read your poem i was amazed of the honesty you gave into and I like that about the poem.Its true and has ...

Hi there I'm China Cookie! I really did enjoy reading your poem. Wa extreamly catching in the last half. The questions in the beggining laked alot of true emotion. But ...