ChimpanzeeMinkey

So I just wrote this yesterday, I'm not all that great at poetry but I hope it's enjoyable. Any pointers/advice would be awesome! Thanks Before the dawn turns into dustAnd ...

So here it is rewritten and hopefully improved upon:Behind a lace of moonlit silence,between wakeful eyes and hidden dreams.You come to me on lulling waves, of tantalizing melodies.Amidst the haze ...

Spoiler! : So this was a somewhat spur of the moment piece. I'm too tired to think of a more fitting title, or for that matter, to think at all ...

Winter had an icy grip on the city as large, white flakes drifted down from the gray heavens. The trees were naked skeletons, only slightly resembling their summer selves. The ...