ChimeraMania

Ah I get it, well as long as you feel the chapter is over then that's all that matter. And I'm glad I pointed it out again. You're welcome and ...

Thanks, still so cute

LOL meh as long as ya' liked it.

Thanks, I changed it.

Yes that is the chorus and the other lines make up the verse, I couldn't space it right though

You're welcome and if you need any future help, just post a link to your work on my wall and I'll get to it.

Ah now I do understand the quotations and the picture helped a lot. I really do like this now that it's a bit more understanding. You're welcome for the review. ...

I just want to tell you that this in my LONGEST review EVER.

Don't forget to leave a like. I'm still glad you looked at it.

OH O.O, *changes we to we'll quickly* That does sound better, thanks for that. I'm glad you liked it and I will (continue to publish more work, although they may ...

LOL seems like everybody loves that line haha. It was one of my best one. I don't do poetry often, I mostly just write them when I have a novel ...

Ah, other therapist trying to get her to admit she killed Mr. Hapeson. I see you point. Okay got ya', so I really need to work on this. Thanks.

Okay I get what you're saying and I guess it does mean that it's important because it leads to her going 'home.' So, I'll edit this and try reworking it, ...

No, nobody believes that the MC killed anyone, let alone her parents. They were dead before she made it home. You're suppose to question if what she did was real. ...

Okay so it's not that she doesn't care, it's that she, figured out what happened. You will see in further chapters that it happened once before. I didn't stay too ...