ChimeraMania

Yeah I get what you're saying, I feel like taking the end off and adding that to the next part, but I'll do a vote after everyone in the SID ...

read it again, I just changed a part or some and yeah I know but thing about it, if it ever got published (even though I not really hoping for ...

Hey, I'm changing one part so I can start taking out the ~~ to be able to use transition.

How about, where the first ~~ is, I take it out and replace it with the doorbell ringing again but have it be the memory and him actually speaking? Wait ...

Ah...rule one for her: if she doesn't anybody than SHE can't kill anybody. She never opened the door. His name is Devin, she says it towards the end. Only answer ...

*remembering*

YAY...oh...go me, go me....I did good...with the errors. But (haha) yes the "~~" part is because she's remember specific *important* parts. I don't really know how to transition into it ...

Oh wow...I did not know that....well you see my point on wanting points

@BellaRoma haha yeah, but I'm okay with it...@focusedonwriting just probably needed points. Although it would have been good to read a review, I'm okay with it. But you__@BellaRoma__ are gonna ...

Well firstly, from the top the to middle, I thought it was, when it came to the end (i.e. middle) that they were trying to gangr.a.p.e her or something, but ...

You're welcome and do you see how long it is?? All your fault.

I will wait, don't you worry.

KK, thanks.

Me either, so it's okay.

I started crying at the "That you might have loved me.." part. This is so sweet. More. I have to have More. What happens next??????????????????????????