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Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 3
Okay a few more nick-picks here. She couldn’t cheer up she could only lie there in agony. She could only lay there. Some good man found her when she escaped ...
Jun 21, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 3 - The Friend
Thanks for the feed back WW or personal stalker and I'm make sure to make some thing clearing in the next part, but not too much. I'm working towards confusing ...
Jun 21, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 4 - The Queendom
Thanks, and glad you understand it. BellaRoma had a little trouble, but she helped me understand. Not all readers read the same and some can be confused by the simplest ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 4 - The Queendom
LOL thanks and I will fix those mistakes later. I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it answered some of your questions as well. Just know that it is ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 4 - The Queendom
Nah you did great, this wasn't at all too negative. Btw, that's who is at the door, he only calls her Tay. Glad to see I had mistakes though, I ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited
Well that was very nice. I guess there isn't any reports about women being the abusers either. HUH.....Can you look that up for me? Because I remember this one show ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited
You are so very welcome, but the thanks goes to you for writing it and bringing light to this type of situation.
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited
Boom goes the dynamite. Well Dan-na-me-tae.
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited
I will review this later.
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 3
Ah I see, well what's every comfortable to you you should to it
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 3
Meh, sine I'm being honest here, I wish you had kept it the other way.
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: Cultural Restrictions | Unedited
Your welcome Art, btw I'm working on the next part to Loveless and then I'll have to review a LOT so I can post the next part to She is ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: A Wind Twin. Part One.
NO, it's Yes Lady
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: A Wind Twin. Part One.
Remember, it (whatever the reviewer says) doesn't matter as much as your feeling-gut. If something is the way YOU want it, keep it that way. You can correct the small ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 3 - The Friend
Dang I though I changed that. Thanks for the review and I will get on those. And I'm glad you liked it.
Jun 10, 2015
