Chimchar

The updated file is here

Welll thank you Meep. I read your comments. But I forgot to say that the file itself is pretty old. Ther main character is supposed to be calm. That's just ...

Hi. Thank you for your review. Can you do me a favor and paste it to my email address? I don't see your attachment and It would be easier to ...

You elaborate it quite well. But would it make a difference if some of the article was omitted? Did you enjoy the story? What did you like about it? How ...

Big rule that a lot of writers forget - Audience comes before Context. A newspaper is aimed at people who want the news, plain, honest, short. Your story however is ...

You will. Go to the advance critique board to read the rest. Please tell me how I can improve.

Sorry if it was so long, I dont expect people to read the whole thing. If you want to read more, just got to the advanced critique forum and download ...

Okay then. Fixed it. How was it confusing. Just tell me so I can fix it.

Please tell me what you think. I worked very hard on it. I know it's long but I don't expect yu to read it all. Thank you very much for ...

Err.. You say it's distubing. I don't think your poem is disturbing, unless you literally cut off your chest or something. But IMO this poem must protray love, rejection and ...

Why don't you try to make your story shorter. That way you will get more replies. Don't worry i made that same mistake before.

Hi, I'm new here and I'm a novice writer. I wrote this story and I seek opinions. Chapter two: Werewolf’s curse. After seeing Lily and the man walking away in ...