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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stubborn Lover

    It's beautifully written .......but there's no need to play around with the words so much, you shouldn't let the reader's attention slip. Certain parts seem a little ordinary. But still ...

    May 13, 2008


Tell me, what is it you plan to do / with your one wild and precious life?
— Mary Oliver