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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I'm adorable and nice (and humble)" ~Kierra What would you, under any sircumstance, never eat?
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*
Okay, this is actually my first real attempt at reviewing someone's work. I usually don't read fantasy stories- ever, but I'm interested in what happens to the baby. Anyways, I'm ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Disease
Thank you for the advice. It's just a little bit embarrassing when I see all the mistake I made X^) I also learned about my comma addiction. @ mandapanda- hey, ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Dogs by a mile. Cats are evil." Kierra
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Far Away
This is very interesting. I'm not sure I really like the main character (I don't know why, but that happens a lot with me...) But I like Liam and the ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Disease
The blast of cold air that flowed into Kierra’s lungs as she breathed in let her know she was awake. Her throat burned with thirst so that it hurt to ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 2
I love this so far. The first chapter was written a little bit awkwardly but this one sounds better; also I like the change in views. Grammarwise, I don't know ...
Apr 16, 2011