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Re: Chosen- Started.
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Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: Ask a stupid question...
Because deep down, they crave the life blood of sheep. Why are clothes so expensive?
Jun 21, 2012 -
Re: To Mars and Back Again [Starting | Still Accepting]
mayeth I reserve a male slot, please? I'll have the profile up soon.
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: Dogs - Warning Signs
Hey y'all, I was hoping for some advice on writing informative things like this. :) "Can I pet your dog?" the little girl asks loudly. "She's very pretty." "Um, it's ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Kierra, just Kierra. I don't know what it means. Q: Where is your favorite place and what memories made it ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Novel Follower -Gone Fishing; Be Back Soon-
Hello ultraviolet. I was wondering if you could possibly review my novel, Disease. you don't have to review chapters 1 and 2, but it would probably be helpful if you ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Disease chapter 3
Every muscle in Kierra’s fevered body ached. She thrashed wildly, trying to ease the pain. She opened her mouth, her swollen tongue flopping uselessly into the mud, and tried to ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Always stick together Chapter 1
Oh, this sounds interesting *glues eyes to screen* I shall attempt to nitpick this as I'm reading it, but I have a feeling I won't be able to find anything. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Far Away
hola forsakinshadow! I'm going to review this now... (I can never think of anything witty to say before I review something.) grammar edit word edit comments Anyways, here I go: ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Autobiography 1.1
Hello Lena! Here is my review: grammar word editing my comments Two months. It scares the shit out of me to even think about it. Only two little months. Two ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Delicious review sandwitches!
Welcome to the deli of reviews! our menu: We will definatly make a sandwitch out of these: ~ Most short stories and novels, especially -romantic short stories -general fiction short ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Disease chapter 2
Thank you guys for reviewing this! I fixed it a bit. I'd just like to say that I only use so many fragments is that in real conversation, that's how ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Would you mind reviewing ^ that? Thanks :)
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Disease chapter 2
This isn't my best work. It's kind of short, because this is a bit of a lull in the plot and I wanted to get out of it before it ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sweet Listener chapter 1
Hello! I'm going to review your story, and then tell you what I thought of it as a whole. grammar editing word editing comments Welp, here I go.. Preface Gently, ...
Apr 19, 2011
