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Hmm...Godame it Bubbles! you stole all the points! *sulks* But aye, punctuation, spelling and popping one half into a new verse would make it a bit easier to read, I ...

I spent about five minutes trying to figure out what the blazes your avatar was doing...and then I was looking around the page, wondering if I -was- in the poetry ...

Well...I'll welcome you too, since everyone else is XD and I liked your poem. I don't usually like free verse, they tend to lose sence about halfway through and degenerate ...

Grar! You stopped! Right in an important part too! Grr! Evidently, I'm hooked. It's good, for the bare bones of a story. You've written the basic plot up to a ...

The artist scuplts her a set of cherub lips, two handfuls of breasts and twists her locks with gritted stone. He sets her in a garden; a fountain splashing ghosts ...

I like it. Honestly! It's realistic and hits really close to home, this is the sort of thing that actually goes on in our society and the appalling fact is, ...

I rather liked it. Well written and great detail without going overboard (I consider Lord of the Rings as an overboard of detail) But has been said before, a sort ...

It's rather sad aye...but that's understandable. And I am of the opinion that railing against the unchangable is just silly. No offence to those that are devout believers but...personally, I ...