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hekategirl is mature for her age. especially speaking of poetry, when i was eleven years old, everything i wrote was the same cliche tale of racism and orphans. i really ...

wow..hawk and gala yall are so pretty! hawk, and i still love your hair. arvandor: niiiice :lol: I took this picture earlier. : sighs : me and my fat face. ...

This reminds me of something that I wrote when I was around your age. Except, mine rhymed and was just a flat out disasterpiece. The fact that you're 11 really ...

Well, in my opinion, before the last three stanzas, you seem to repeat yourself over and over again with the same topic. It became sort of a nuisance. Anyhow, you ...

If you ask me, writing a story within a poem is a rather intricate task. However, I think this is an exceptional poem to have been narrative. Except these two ...

I liked this...I disliked it...I'm not sure which I'm leaning to the most, probably somewhere in the middle. It was cliche, but yet, I felt like it was something new. ...

In the city of Atlanta, The simplest game of hide-and-seek, Turns into murder He asphyxiates underground, He’s an unsolved mystery In a city where no one has answers Everyone knows ...

:dies: i almost did cry...

Yes, it is in the middle of nowhere. I must admit, it is peaceful. However, I've never lived anywhere but in small towns except for when I lived in Los ...

This is what I see within about a 10 Mile Radius. This is up the street from my house. I'm sure you think I'm joking. But when I say I ...

This is my boring room. wow...look at all that stuff on the bed. wow...look at all that stuff on the floor. :oops: At the bottom of my bed--that long black ...

My long black curls were cut off long ago making me uglier than I already was I ditched the harp for a guitar that I still can’t play And my ...

Sahjsa ------------- there are too many knives, sitting patiently in the corner of a kitchen drawer. the same tale of teenage suicide unfolds wrestling with Future somewhere in Midnight's sky ...

CHampionEVryYear (5:20:44 PM): no, some stupid terd did it CHampionEVryYear (5:20:47 PM): and then she blocked us CHampionEVryYear (5:20:50 PM): and warned us CHampionEVryYear (5:20:52 PM): shes stupi

did you...change something?