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Re: Lies
For a season I live by the lie we call love— A temporary insanity I held onto Yet I knew nothing would last forever. I don’t have time to waste ...
May 9, 2005 -
Re: blue girl
I'd like to describe this poem as being more abstract than anything. "When you ran your fingers down my back, I bled. when she runs her fingers down my back, ...
May 9, 2005 -
Re: mancunian reject
You have a lot of power in your words. From reading your poetry, it's evident that you spend a lot of time intricately placing words together...with you it seems like ...
May 9, 2005 -
Re: Sheltered (revised)
"Locked away in the towers of safety Shackled to protection’s prison" It seemed like there should have been something in between that.
May 9, 2005 -
Re: graduation
I like this a lot. It was very literal and narrative... "Well we went to a movie and we went back to your house and I am not a virgin ...
May 9, 2005 -
Re: Hysteria is back in the building
yay! chris! this is chevy chevelle the kid writer from tywc and from msn... hey! you never sign on anymore.
May 4, 2005 -
Re: So tell me...
Historical fiction is better anyway.
May 3, 2005 -
Re: Your Future
Well, according to deathclock.com, I have until March 4, 2045 until I die so yeah, I'll be just turning 55. Anyway, before then,lol. Hopefully I'll go to college dadadada and ...
May 3, 2005 -
Re: Post your city!
Hmph. My old neighborhood had 11.
May 3, 2005 -
Re: future (p.s. A-L-L comments welcome)
You are so amazing...you take the same cliche topics that every teen poet writes--or, at least attempts to write and you turn it all around to something brand new that ...
May 2, 2005 -
Re: division
jack--im like so impressed. i dont really know what to say. "when it all falls down, flag at half-mast, scarves held proudly the tears will flow from the streets to ...
May 1, 2005 -
Re: Post your city!
My house is big? Wha? Really? I didn't know that...
May 1, 2005 -
Re: Guitar Tabs
Lol, the first song I ever learned on Guitar was Getting Into You by Relient K. It's really easy, and I even corrected the guitar tabs by listening to the ...
May 1, 2005 -
Re: Post your pic on thread 2
Okay so maybe this doesn't count because you can't see my face, but it is a picture of me, am I correct?
May 1, 2005 -
Re: Fear Not California
I'm always a sucker for California poems... :sighs: makes me think of home. I loved it.
Apr 29, 2005
