Chevy

I love the imagery and outstanding ending. I'm sorry...maybe I'm just in a really good mood but I don't really have critique for this.

Hello A.T., I am Morgan. Often referred to as Chevy...whatever works.

and they were just fools, with dull, dull eyes yeah, they were fools, with dull, dull minds. I dont like the repetition here, it seems immature compared to the rest ...

Ares: Attractive, much? I just cut my hair, guys. But I haven't taken a picture yet..I should have one soon.

God....SOOOO long ago. Nate dragged me and Duskglimmer kicking and screaming from the Young Writers GUILD way back in December of 2004. I didn't realize that you two weren't from ...

once it's the new year, it's all over sitting in a crowded waffle house just off the interstate. and everyone's saying, "hey, it's been raining all year" as the drunk ...

The rhyming in the first stanza was weak, but up until it got to the fourth line, I was very much so intrigued. A simpleton once tricked himself And thought ...

I know I'm replying to this forever and a half later, but yes! I totally forgot about this..wow, this was back in the TYWC days. We've come such a long ...

I love the idea but pass the first stznza, I'm not necessarily sure it was well-written. It could use some improvement...different wording. But it has potential. The French was unexpected, ...

I found this to be romantic yet in a strange sense. It was unusual, I thought but I still understood it/enjoyed it. And it was refreshing. I especially liked the ...

Like cradium said, it was well-written. And it flowed very well. Not necessarily sure I found it strikingly provocative as most of your other works, but it was still enjoyable. ...

I opened the car door and remembered those times in September when we'd ride out to 722 with Hillsong in the background with the sun still up there was always ...

Boys: Keep it on topic or this thread will be locked. Fantasy: Don't mess with Brad. He hails from Valhalla and has given you the constructive criticism you asked for. ...

Hey Brad, I loved this. I think this poem is wonderful. From my understanding, the speaker is looking at old photographs, back when Grandma looked young and pretty. Grandpa's appearence ...

a farewell. a long, sad goodbye. for many years, he held onto his trangression and locked it in the gun rack leaving it in its disposition: oiled and shined, loaded ...