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"you know i'd dance for you even at midnight when the sun has died and i can't see except for your sparkling eyes they'd illuminate my soul but my pillow ...

"you know i'd die for you if you stopped running from accidents if you stopped pretending to be distant if you stopped killing those who love you most " I'm ...

"Tie it up in chains, hold it tight Grip it down with all my might" Was a little irritating. Overall, this poem was very dramatic. I loved the last line.

wellll i already commented on this...but just so everyone can see it: morgan: O.O brad: o.s morgan: your poems are starting to worry me... brad: oh? morgan: yea, its like ...

I like guys who have a sense of humor, since I have none.

For some reason when I read this poem, I thought about the Civil War...I have noooo idea why...

Group it all together and make it a letter to somebody. It's a lot better that way. And that's all I can say.

Yes, I would have to agree with Bubblewrapped. Sometimes rhyming poetry can really take away from the poem. It would also be nice if you dug back into the memory ...

"i wrote this when i was really, really depressed...... " Yes, the title alone is evidence. I must say, I have several poems written almost just like this. You were ...

It was short and to the point... & I don't mean to sound stupid...but...what language is this?

I'd have to agree with Helen (Rei). Most poems written by teenagers are written about suicide and how someone did them wrong. Heh...it's all I write about. I must say, ...

This is the kind of poem you'll find in a collection of poetry 50 years from now. I loved how you repeated "City lit by fireflies." It was very innovative. ...

Wow. I really wish I could write like this. Perhaps I'll be there someday. However, there were a few things I was confused about: "Is their a reason for art? ...

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