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As I was reading this, I acquired the feeling of being brought down to a lower and lower state of existence. I loved how you brought it to a full ...

Brilliant, and I love the energy! However, I must say, some of that energy seem to die down in the last two lines. It wasn't as strong as the other ...

Turn you down? No way! I'm really excited for you, Brad.

mocha cappucinos. all I can say.

we were buried at the back of our church graveyard. a lot of us died in those fast summer cars. there were no billboards to remind us to slow down. ...

This poem is lovely and melancholy. I love the feel of it, the simple yet beautiful language. This is wonderful: In the shut dark of my eyes, I am the ...

That's a good one.

A message from a guy...who happens to be particularily interesting ;)

He's a musical mastermind. Anyone heard of him?

Ah wow, I remember writing poems like this. Personally, I believe that political poetry is always difficult to pull off and I would suggest that this needs a little work. ...

Thanks WL, But for everyone: just out curiousity, aside from the fact that the structure...well, sucks , how is the imagery? I've been experimenting with applying real-life situations that I ...

John Knowles hands down anyday. Ever since I read 'A Seperate Peace,' I have been a changed woman, haha.

I didn't ask for anything, but I ended up with clothes and money. Doesn't hurt to have that. Also, an iPod alarm clock. That made me happy. Like, 10 people ...

Hmm... well, my dream wasn't exactly PG, to put it lightly. But my best friend came to visit me at college, and we were just walking around, and suddenly he ...

I want to write more songs. And to get better grades.