Chevy

Concerning the first stanza, I guess it depends on what style of writing appeals to you. I personally am a very much a literal person so the first stanza was ...

You have great imagery, I must say. Rhyming a little off it some places but it's alright. Not sure I can say I'm a huge fan of the title, I ...

Hello Electric Tangerine. My name is Morgan, but you may call me Chevy. Whatever works. I must say, I'm not sure why, but I absolutely love your username.

Forgive me if there's a thread already like this, but I searched and didn't see one. Anyhow, I was wondering if there were any other photographers on YWS. If so, ...

Emma: Who gave you the right to grow up so much?! Ha. I really like your hair. This is me. Modeling my artwork at my school's art show. I'm such ...

The first stanza was great, the second stanza even better. Not a huge fan of the third, but the fourth brought it all full surface. Like Jack said, you definitely ...

In my personal opinion, I thought it was beautiful. It was a little hard for me to catch on in the first few lines because I wasn't sure where you ...

I really enjoyed this. It was very descriptive and insightful. However, I think the fourth stanza was probably your weakest. It didn't seem to fit the calibur of the rest ...

Wow, I love the theme. 'Lovers and Thieves' really rang a bell for me. It was repetitive/consistent enough to be a song, but wasn't at all hasty or overbearing. I ...

Chevy, I disagree with you on the first lines too, it wasn't forced rhyming, it was using assonance to create a warm languid atmosphere. I didn't say it was forced ...

Wow, I love the brightness...the provocativeness. It was very stimulating, and I must say the rhythm added to that tremendously. Usually, I am not the greatest fan of the repetition ...

Hey, thanks everyone...especially Fabien. I'm glad you appreciated the imagery, that's really the only point I was trying to make. I apologize for the awful structure and such, but I ...

Fabien: Thank you very much Rieda: Yeah, I had a little difficulty writing the last stanza which I am still in the process of working on (thank you for bringing ...

I was inspired to write this after reading Wallace Steven's "Thirteen Ways to See a Blackbird." I. His eyes were fixed on dark, flat rooftops and the birds that moved ...

The attitude of this piece seemed to be very short and to the point. Also a little rush, but it sounded great. Not only did I read through it smoothly, ...