Chevy

If I had absolutely nothing to do with my time, I could scan each page and and sent it to you.

Actually, I think Depression is somewhat an illness.

Hunter: Is that really the one you got? If so, that isn't fair because your name actually makes sense.

Question: What's with all the added dots and extra letters? And something tell me there's a joke I'm missing (as always).

Every time I see Chewy I think Chevy. I'm so conceited.

It was a very lovely poem. I especially loved the last line though it could use a little work to be even more powerful. This poem could also use a ...

I agree with Liz (TBR). It was very beautiful and if I had a boyfriend I would wish I could write things like this about him, too. I loved how ...

I kinda figured that was where you were coming from but with that subject, you could make this a very powerful poem. I totally understand writing poems on something that ...

My phone has this cool thing where it lets me create my own ringers. It's friggin awesome so yeah. You can forget me paying for ringers. All I have to ...

Alright! I just don't know how exactly I'll get it to Australia...*shrugs*

Once again, I think some of the lines could be combined. Especially in the beginning. Towards the end, it doesn't seem choppy. "Left alone tears Staining ruptured Sanguine mutilated cloths ...

Very quick and clean but it seems a little incomplete. Perhaps you should build off of this.

Well, the title sent chills down my spine and I was totally expecting something different. Slightly dissapointing but I'll try to ignore that. Some of the short lines like: "Time ...

I'm trying to get away from the sympathy vote but it's virtually impossible so I'll just take the easy way out and agree with the others.

Wow. CL, this song is so beautiful! Do you have the music for it? If so, I would love to hear it. And you are very much so a lyricist.