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Thank you all. fairy_twinkletoes_13: it's ripped up wallpaper.

Fascinating job on the first one...the detail is quite impressive, and very interesting composition as well.

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Brad, I didn't have a problem connecting anything together here, and I thought it was probably the most powerful and moving poem you've written. The chaos and confusion others had ...

Oh Brad, this is so heartbreaking! You sound so sad and lonely in the recording, and I just want to reach out and hug you. I know you're not going ...

Imagine Piano Driven...Key of G. Structure wise, my intentions were for it to seem a little disoriented, not very consistent I suppose. I am possibly recording this this afternoon. If ...

Oh this can be taken in so many ways.

Thanks guys. Oregon Girl: I wrote this on a whim and seriously did not even think about punctuation, or even to some extent, structure. However, I will probably work on ...

I'm not really sure I grasped the meaning of this poem, but I do know, I appreciated the language used in this piece greatly. You had my attention from beginning ...

it was kind of scatter brained in the beginning but it improved in the third stanza. i kind of like that feel, but my only problem would be that it's ...

I think "We're all wearing masks" is to cliche to be repeated so many times. Other than that, it wasn't astounding, but fair enough to get by I suppose. Tell ...

I died on Salem Bridge above the Salem River where my father takes his boats out in the middle of the night. where he sips his loyal moonshine and doesn't ...

It had a very good flow to it, I couldn't tell where it was going and I liked that.

It was a little cliche up until "Angels" and from then on, it was a rather enjoyable piece. I could almost do without everything before that line. I also love ...

The repetitiveness kind of took away from the poem and I would also suggest altering the last line. Other than that, there's a good theme here and some potential from ...