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Re: Favourite Lyrics
Behind These Hazel Eyes and Because of You are the only songs I've heard that you listend. Behind These Hazel Eyes just seemed like another Since U Been Gone to ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Unecessary
Dear Fellow YWSers, I don't know if I should be doing this but I have to come to realize this, and it is very sad. A few minutes ago I ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Man in Blue
I have to be honest, I was loving it (even though the colors were hurting my eyes) until the third stanza. Perhaps all that that came after it wasn't necessary. ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Perfect
Overall, a poem a lot of people could relate to. A little redundant and of course it's the "c" word as well, but I'll leave that alone this time around. ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Fade Away
Gosh, I wonder if this stuff came out of my mind when I was thirteen. Suicides are very typical to write about. Especially when you're just starting out and you ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Living in the Shadows
I'm really sorry that you live in the shadow of your brother but this poem was practically a re-make of Ashlee Simpon's Shadow. But I don't know. Perhaps that's what ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: -theLibertine-
I didn't understand it...especially the first word but I loved the imagery and word usage. The part about the pretty little emo boys was good even though it's becoming a ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: What made you happy today?
Let's see...what made me happy today. I found my Fender shirt.
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: Not afraid to die
There was nothing special about this but I guess there doesn't always have to be something special. However, it could use something to make it stick out. As of now ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (3)
Snoink: that was hilarious what you did to Sureal Sarah: Sorry about what happened to your house… Noxios: you look like my ex-friend's girlfriend who everybody hates o.O but you’re ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: a little something
I have a hard time relating to romantic poetry, stories or anything. However, it wasn't that complicated with this one, I guess it's because I sort of know you. I ...
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: Atomic Number 50
Verse One your heart's an achor so afraid to leave your heart is anger so afraid of defeat atomic number 50 never burns out obligation is your number one doubt ...
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: My Favorite Form Is...
If this had been somewhere around May or June, I would have said poetry, definitely. However, I have lost that gift (though it only really lasted a good handful of ...
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: Forget Foucault
*Chokes On Tears* Why...why...why tonight ? Anyway, this poem is hard to critique when I was able to relate so well. Granite, half the imagery was completely irrelevant to my ...
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: Favourite Lyrics
yoha ahoy: my sister LOVES Superchick. we saw them at aquire the fire back in february. they have good stage preformance even though i don't really like them. Atomic Number ...
Sep 21, 2005
