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  • Lounge, The Re: McCain Running Mate

    McCain chose Palin as a political stunt. Outside of the state of Alaska, clearly, she's inexperienced. It disheartens me that McCain would put his own political interests above the country's. ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel right now?

    I'm writing a novelette. I'm unsure of it's title, but it's about a family involved in the Communist Party in the United States. The story takes place in the late ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I've Come So Far

    I definitely saw where you were going with the emotion, but like someone else said, it could be a little stronger. The line, "my only anchor to this earth," really ...

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What I thought he said

    I like the unsureness of this, a sense of absence, I guess. "Because what I wanted was a revolution," my favorite line because it's not exactly a beginning.

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Evil, are we born with it?

    I believe that we are born without direction. As a result, that could result in the negative or the positive. This is why it is important that parental figures give ...

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: McCain vs. Obama

    I voted for Obama. But in all honestly, by default. I don't care for McCain's policies. They favor those of someone else I know. I don't believe that Bush was ...

    Aug 1, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Existence of Hell

    No, it doesn't. Just because I don't sleep with men doesn't mean I can't tell if a man is physically attractive. If God created everything, then God created evil. You ...

    Mar 31, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Most of you probably don't know me, but those who have been here awhile..this is what I look like lately: February 4, 2008 - First day of being eighteen Few ...

    Feb 14, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Panpsychism, in philosophy

    This could be debatable, I'm not sure, but I read that "Panpsychism, in philosophy, is either the view that all parts of matter involve mind, or the more holistic view ...

    Feb 13, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just Pretend I Didn't Tear Your World Apart

    First off, great title. It gives the poem kind of an arrogant (but healthy) precedent. However, despite that, I am having difficulty picking up on the tone. Even though it's ...

    Feb 12, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One in the Same

    I have to say, I really like the title but I feel like it is too short. While historically a short poem has accomplished a lot (William Carlos Williams), this ...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I'll know by then

    Full inner weather and strife Why not a Doctor, a Lawyer, A Butcher with a knife? No, you gave me paper And what do I do with it? I really ...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In the end

    In all honesty, the only line I really liked was "Your loyalty was no longer to me." The rest seemed really cliche. However, I do not feel that this is ...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: the lover, the stranger, the irony

    Thank you Sam. I haven't been writing, I was worried about it at first but I'm glad that you picked up on the tone I was using. I took your ...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: the lover, the stranger, the irony

    Note: If you feel this should be in a different thread, please suggest. Also, it may sound better with an audio...I'm not genius of reading poetry, but I just felt ...

    Jan 29, 2008


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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