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The first time I read it, I just read it and just kinda just...read through it. But now it's the third time I've read it and I'm getting attached to ...

Jack: I had the Samsung E715 for two looks almost just like yours. Those phones last a long time. I have a cellphone and have had one ever since I ...

Thanks everyone...this is my most favorite thing that I have ever written. And the Pre Chorus is actually apart of the Chorus. I just put it there so I could ...

I loved everything except for "Touch Me"...seems like something else should go there. As for everything was great. I've never heard Andrew Lloyd Webber's Memory...instead, I was singing it along ...

Those younger children sure will know how to read the word "Of"...*cough*

AstrangedbeaR: First off, thank you for liking it...but my main reason for saying I won't continue to write poetry is because, at one point and time I was actually okay ...

The repetitive "I" was irritating...the reader can't really relate. It might actually sound nice (well, unique rather) if you didn't have anything where the "I"s are. But the next time ...

Out of all the vulgar language there is, I think the F word is the most lousy way of expressing yourself, and like Qi's poem (well, this isn't as near ...

To be honest, if I had heard this read aloud, I would have laughed my *** off, especially with it coming from you. But reading it in my head it ...

Rhyming seemed forced. And the funny part is, I didn't even know that I was rhyming...I so did not mean to do that. Whupps...

I don't think we'll ever get on the same page, here. What's the use?

And I witnessed it.

Bell Bottom Blues - Eric Clapton before this... Welcome to the Jungle - Guns N Roses

sings

I liked how you switched from first person to third person without any specific notification. "been any great purpose in corralling the anxious foals, deflecting neighbors’ cattle, waiting in frost ...