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8/10 - It was neat how it was broken up.

^reminds me of toys r us (please dont ask why...i think it might have something to do with your username)

Nothing Else Matters - Metallica does anyone besides EBM and myself listen to good music?? Lol just kidding...I'm kidding... Considering you and EBM's last choices, I think you think a ...

This is a song as well as a poem. But I figured it would get more attention being posted here. It may seem a little redundant but if you were ...

Sounds like someone is having a hard time... A little lengthy, little cliche, could use a little imagery, and of the likes so yeah--work on it.

Even though I didn't agree with the poem, I thought it was very heart-felt and it wa good how you stirred away from cliches for the most part. Very well ...

Very good imagery. Braided hair like coarse leather. Loved it. But as I have been told several times, it was really good but it led up to almost nothing. When ...

Um...whoa. I don't really know the point of this but um... is there a point?

I haven't posted here in forever...

Nothing Else Matters - Metallica does anyone besides EBM and myself listen to good music?? Lol just kidding...I'm kidding...

I know it was about death but I wouldn't consider it "emo" but it was really really heartbreaking and kind of hard to read. I read it last night and ...

I never celebrated Halloween. It used to make me mad when I was a kid and I would get jealous of all of my friends but now I don't really ...

Duskglimmer: Sanctus Real owns!!! Fade to Black by Metallica

Thanks everyone...this is like one of my favorite songs that I've written. Do you come up with a tune first then put lyrics to it, or the other way around? ...