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You're from Trinidad? That's too cool..I am so fascinated in the way yall talk...but welcome to YWS! There's so much to do and so many nice people here...hope you like ...

Haha that's so clever... I used to be a tekkie but I was delivered lol.

I know! And look how many more posts you have than me :shock:. I wish my computer went faster so I could post as much as I would like to.

Deject...isn't it re ject?

As of today, I have been a member of YWS 365 days. *bows*

Grrrrr...stop showing me everything and then posting it on YWS because then I don't get the excitement of coming here and saying, "Oh, look Brad wrote another poem for me ...

"I traced my fingers around your body" *Shudders* I thought this was cliche and kind of boring for the beginning of the poem... As for the rest of it, I ...

As Liz first stated, it lacked quite a bit of emotion.... I think the main problem, was because of it's lack of imagery and metaphors. But then again, if someone ...

Four year later, my older brother boarded a train Did you mean four years later? I'm a leaf blown through a twister. Great for the middle of the poem...loved this ...

Oh wow that was had a really good flow though.

::a few things to forget:: add water to the ocean just to watch it go again turning into rain found on porchsteps of American homes because little children feel that's ...

The first stanza was a bit rushed and in my opinion in could be split in two. I liked this idea and it kind of reminds of my poem "Old ...

Wow...I really liked this. From the title to the last line. My only critique would be: but nothing changes your DNA and the opposing side was a mouthful. but when ...

FantasyTeen: dude I love that song Sooner or Later by Switchfoot and before now.... Welcome to the Jungle by Guns N Roses

False >has a split in her lip< \/ is wearing white socks \/ (i think i did that right)