Chevy

I really liked it except for, "Then no more suit's, shoe's and tie's." You could change it to "Then no more suits nor ties" because otherwise you made it sound ...

i agree with nate--the end was kind of broken upbut i really,really, really liked the last stanza. the part about the shower kind of threw me off though. *shrugs*

I walk alone. My existence-- Means nothing. My very human, Has been forgotten, My utter existence, Doesn't count anymore. When they go counting, They exclude me. I don't amount, So ...

it does sound like an indecisive little weed...i dunna know. my opinion. *shrugs*

i thought this was a good one when i wrote it,but now that i read it over and over, i see that its not so good. however, i would like ...

And I was just wondering-- Where have you gone? It was just the other day, It was you I relied on. But now, you've gone, And I don't understand. Now ...

yeah, you did really well with the rhyming...better than i ever could, of course...some people are good with making their poetry rhyme. and then others,like myself, are rather unsuccessful.

A lot of people end up in a hold because they never cophyrighted their material. Maybe they didn't think they had to. Maybe they didn't have the time. Or maybe ...

okay so yeah, i tried this non-rhyming thing and this is what i came up with.like i said, thats not my gift but if you could tell me what you ...

Burning and scorching me, My skin is etching away, Permanent scars and bruises will forever remain, I try to prevent the flames, But they continue to keep spreading, Fire is ...

okay, okay, rhyming is all i know but i'll try to use something else. also, i dont know what made me choose Boston.

It s like a morning with no sun, Like a bank containing no money, A millionaire living in poverty. Or like a book enclosing no pages, It s a like ...

wow...that is a nice poem...none of my poetry is as near as good as that!

when i went to go see the Incredibles,it was me and these two other girls who are 15 and 16 and none of us wanted to admit that we wanted ...

ZZAP: i was being sarcastic about the best seller poetry--neither my fiction writing are one of the lamest writers i know. *sighs* i'll try to get some of my stories ...