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oh...i also forgot Nirvana and Simple Plan. i like Linkin Park too but not as much as everyone else...too many people like Linkin Park as it is and their litle ...

this IS a good poem--why i cant write like you...i may never know.

thanks for your comments--but i dont have any just really wicked (good wicked) poetry.

i thought this was intrigued me tremendously--i dont think you should changen anything. but i started not to read it because i HATE "Roses" by Outkast.

"pace by pace by pace " should have just been "pace by pace" tomorrow was spelled wrong. "Upon re-opening his eyes he saw to great surprise One of their men, ...

i wrote this poem @ some 2am so if it doesnt make a lot of sense,then you'll know why:-)

It's a place I can hardly remember, But a place I would like to be, A dream that I once had, A hope I can't just imagine. Everything I hate, ...

I dodge lightening bolts In a raging storm. I'm searching for shelter, For all around me is darkness. I'm running in a direction, One I can't identify. I'm screaming for ...

I try not to remember, But the past is stained on my heart. I've tried to wash it out, With thoughts of happiness, Yet, I still see the past, Standing ...

i think this poem was put together very well--i think it flowed really good. *two thumbs up*

well, serious poems dont always go so well when rhyming,but this one was really good--it didn't sound forced or like you were trying to rhyme. dont change a thing!

my fav bands: chevelle switchfoot green day the killers franz ferdinand muse 12 stones simple plan i listen to all rock--i dont have a variety--which probably isnt a good thing, ...

that was...strange...and um...well...strange...

wow.... 1word: POWERFUL.

well, i think that some of the lines run together for instance, " and the first dark stain they found proved not to be blood " but sometimes thats fine,i ...