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I honestly have no critique for this. Not to say that it is perfect, but I feel as if this were driven nicely and well organized. However, for or some ...

i took a picture of myself everyday for a year: . went back to the dormitory i lived in 2 years ago. i miss these days. my crazy family so ...

THE DEATH OF CAPITALISM. Not really. But the economic recession will get worse. There's plenty more bad things from that corner to come. I agree. I think people are finally ...

Nate, the founder was a fellow member over at The Young Writer's Club, which I was pretty active on about 4 years ago, when YWS started. I decided to come ...

This poem was very effective in the way that it was slightly abstract, yet objective. I particularly like the fifth line, as it implied modernity's relation to what I found ...

Gahks: Thanks. I took your was/were advice. In all honesty, I wrote this poem in the submit box, and didn't revise it at all! The lack of punctuation was definitely ...

my father was a gracious man in summer's endless fields he ripped down wheat in a place where "even beyond all the colors," he said "all Texans will never be ...

I really like the tone of this. However, I feel as if it could still be achieved without some of the adjectives you used such as: Tormented by the winter ...

Interesting. Kind of reminds me of a "Practices and Philosophies" excerpt tagged at the end of a book of Oscar Wilde essays. Both of these poems have great topics, and ...

I guess my college's internet network is DSL. You wouldn't know it, though, it acts like dial-up

I really like where this is going. Perhaps, just as a suggestion, you could try this as a begin to prose instead of poetry. I'm not sure why, but this ...

there were men in colored suits on faded album covers and I asked him if they still played shows, but of course he didn't know what yesterday had taught him ...

"Smoking Camels on Your Grave" Interesting way to personify cigarettes, I like that. I felt that the poem as a whole was a bit typical, and more imagery is needed ...

This is kind of like the epilogue to something I wrote just the other day. I get this vibe that this is other words, raw which I am very much ...

I like the transition from lyrical to dramatic. A beautiful story, and the imagery really holds it together. The romantic aspect of it was also quite strong. " I later ...