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I agree with Skye Demon...this poem was beautiful. The ending was what really caught me and had me thinking, "WOW." I really liked this one, though. *Sigh* Why can't I ...

This poem was absolutely phenomenal. It was disconjointed (is that a word?) is some places but this part doesn't need to be changed at all: "But you will not come ...

She opened her door, Inviting him in, Never really knowing, He wasn't there to help. He came in and smiled, Looked around then sat down, Turned on the TV, Didn't ...

Okay, some of things books for instance Walter Dean Myer's Fallen Angels and Private Parts by Howard Stern and Sex by Madonna but the Face on the Milk Carton? Julie ...

I thought this was really nice. However, in the second paragraph it became slightly confusing...afterwards...you came back and regained clarity. Just change the second paragraph a little so it won't ...

This is only my 84th post but yet, I have more points than anybody except for Nate. *Shrugs*

I'm climbing the ladder, Finally reaching the top, I'm afraid to look down, So I can see who's watching. The crowd cheers me on, They love what they see, It's ...

I was 13 when I did this...it's from the book "Stolen Words" by Amy Goldman isn't much...but I'd like to know what you think.

The picture is one that I drew a couple of weeks ago. If you can't read the lettering, it's the same as my poem "No One" in the "Other" section, ...

I titled this picture Decidious Among Evergreen when I was 12 or 13 even though you can scarcely make out the decidious tree at the front. Anyways, it was for ...

well, being one of realistic fiction and historical fiction, i thought the subject matter was rather remorseful--i dont usually read things like this. however, your sentence structure was exceptional.

This IS rather powerful and I really enjoyed reading was fast-paced and the rhythym was consistant. Great poem.

Crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a white room and told me to stay in the corners. But there were no corners. So I stayed in the ...

it was rather abrupt and short in some places. however, i do not feel as though that should be changed. abruptiveness and shortness can sometimes be a sensational thing. for ...

I drew this at thirteen I believe...it's supposed to be like medieval times--please tell me what you think.