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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Charon's Mis-metered Limerick

    I was loving it up until this: "howling into noon-time suns with unsharpened, unthrusted knives, getting roped, dragged off by a dusty Brain locked away, " I loved the imagery, ...

    Mar 21, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Yet Another Jealousy Story

    I don't know what's gotten into me with this sudden cliche rhyming scheme but God, I pray it goes away. and if you had taken me away, the way you ...

    Mar 21, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I hate the way the world is growing without you

    Okay, so I know I'm not a poet but this is what I got in attempt to write a song...it's about a girl who's (guy) best friend dies, and he ...

    Mar 21, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dry (2) /P

    Oh God... those few minutes, I seriously fell in love with was like I knew him. Weird. And, I hate death..I really do, but I love the bitter sweet way ...

    Mar 20, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)

    Emma: Wow you really grew. Awesome pictures--you're really pretty. This is a really recent picture...and do you like that 400 dollars worth of equipment in my hands? :D And just ...

    Mar 4, 2006
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    1. Bad Girls by Cynthia Voigt she had a pretty pathetic way of writing that book. 2. Haunted by Meg Cabot she was NOT supposed to end up with...with...JESSE!!! I ...

    Feb 18, 2006
  • Official Polls Re: What type of music do you listen to most?

    Jack: Does the Clash count as old punk? I listen to soooo much old school rock...Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, The Who, Queen...all the good stuff.

    Feb 18, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Valentine's Day

    I like the title, actually..cliche as it is. I really liked this though, I only wished it was longer. This sounded really emo: "In this life, I have accrued the ...

    Feb 7, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: The "I'm Back" Thread

    If anyone cares, I am back... Thanks to Nate, I was able to fix some computer problems that were keeping me from coming to the site often. So I guess ...

    Feb 3, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: hey i am new here

    Hello Josh! What's up? Hope you enjoy it here...

    Feb 2, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Bid Remembrance a Rough Farewell

    "I bid Remembrance a rough farewell" What a beautiful line. We could have scavenged for the truths Seemed kind of out of place and kind of took the poem into ...

    Feb 2, 2006
  • Lyrics Re: Someday

    I wrote this song for Hurricane Katrina and Tsunami Victims. But please, don't feel that you have to critique lightly becaude of that. Verse One The water comes up from ...

    Feb 2, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: From Ted Bundy's Lips to a Captive Ear...

    Well, for the starters, you seemed really lonely, but it wasn't the depressing "I'm dying here" lonely. Not sure who you were talking to...well, I might have an idea but ...

    Jan 26, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Shamefully, I know all the words

    Yeah, ironic is a better choice of words.

    Jan 19, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Abercrombie Girls

    I liked the image of 'Abercrombie Girls' and you did a good job portraying them up until this point: "Because they always follow the crowd And never think there own ...

    Jan 18, 2006


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