Chevy

The concept--the message of this poem was very powerful. However, when I looked at it, I saw it as being viewed from both figurative and literal perspectives which I really ...

He's not even 50 and he's already starting with "when I was a kid I had to walk 50kms though killer blizzards and crocodile infested rivers every morning just to ...

I would post my other picture of me outside my new house, but I can't get it to work....ah well. You've seen enough of me anyway. Oh, and btw, could ...

Questions need answering answers need questioning. Very powerful...:considers plagiarism:,lol--jk. Anyway, this poem didn't flow very well in some parts. For instance, I need a white knight on a horse

You have a good concept and a strong closing line, The closing line and the concept were the only reason why I didn't totally trash this poem.

Storm Lord: Why don't you like your hair? I think it's cute! Anyways, I was right again! I know you've probably never talked to me before but when I saw ...

Those were his senior pictures and he said they were a set...I thought he was like at an actual barn or something at first. I want my senior pictures to ...

Yeah...it's bigger now... So amazing how you look almost just like Travis. Okay okay, I'll quit saying it! :wipes tear:

fret

How can you just drive by it, in you? I don't know how the heck that "in you" got there, but I kinda like it there...even though it doesn't make ...

Quit SAYING THAT BRAD!!! That is such a nice picture! There's nothing to laugh about either...

If you ask me, Crysi, nothing needs to be changed.

Yet another midnight poem! I wrote this poem with simply and idea. I wasn't necessarily thinking about it or even noticing what I'm writing. And Brad, I don't know if ...

Only $$ 249.99 $$!!! (After mail-in rebate) Tis the only part I really liked. :( The rest was interesting --it certainly kept me reading...but I'm just not so sure if ...

nah, that's not me. that's jennifer knapp--my ultimate role model! thanks brad--i'm so glad you liked it! i think i may end up going into writing song lyrics...this was my ...