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I felt like this poem didn't really flow--and it was constantly going on to new subjects and not necessarily sticking with one thing. If I just give it time Time ...

i try to though i Was a bit awkward, and probably should be condensed to one line or taken out completely. However, I loved your concept, but the poem just ...

NOTE: This is a very old poem. Perhaps, one of the first I ever wrote... Our dreams are the things That only we can see Only in our minds, Do ...

Thanks for the comments guys--very true. However, I just read this poem over...and I don't think I could ever change anything about it because it's the way I feel about ...

Hm, I had to read this twice to really understand what this poem meant. I like what I read, however, when this is no good sign, where the reader has ...

I was in a terribly bad mood when I posted that--sorry if it came across as being harsh. :cry: Sorry...but I guess it was an okay poem.

Heh...a don't know anyone who made their avator to go with what they look like. For instance me,l lol--I look nothing like my avator...except, I mean, the guitar maybe. Anyway, ...

the earth takes root the trees fall as mankind follows suit the end of all That's a very suitable, decent ending for a poem like this. However, I found a ...

your name sounds so....mystical,lol. anyway, im morgan...i'll be fifteen in less than three weeks! im kind of a laid back not-so hyped up person. i play guitar and i like ...

This is an embarassment to the writing culture. I beg of you--just...don't show this to anyone.

OK...I'm going to do the Incandescence sort of meditative no-capitals thing... Hm. Whatever. All I can say is, Your effort to imitate is distinctively visible.

i thought it sounded a bit juvenile and think maybe it deserves a bit more consideration and depth. I agree with convintojm. There wasn't really much depth here. Also, you ...

Well, I'm not really one for poems that rhyme, simply because in serious poems, they can really take away from the poem itself. However, even though I didn't particulary care ...

Well, if you ask me (which you haven't, but anyway), I think it can be done to one extreme. However, on the other hand, you have to be mindful that ...

GUYS! GUYS! GUYS! I'M THE HAPPIEST PEA IN THE PATCH RIGHT NOW! (okay, yeah brad, I know , that was ultra lame). Anyway, I forgot my dad needed the internet ...