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your scent drives me crazy. Hm, I liked the concept here, however, I think it should be worded differently. "Scent" is a very strange use for describing a person, I ...

Yesterday when my sister and I were in the car, shortly after an Ashlee Simpson song was played on the radio, the announcer stated that yesterday morning, someone out there ...

My favorite singers have changed since my last post. They're now: The Beatles Switchfoot 12 Stones Modern Day John Third Day Chevelle Kutless Skillet Muse The Killers Franz Ferdinand. And ...

Um, okay. I guess I get it now.

Hm, I'm trying to say this as tactfully as I can, but I have figured out your style and it's nothing like what I like, so therefore, that's why I'm ...

What is your decision just tell me for the razor cuts strait to my core That sounded terribly rushed, perhaps with the use of commas it won't be as bad. ...

Angst, angst, piss, bitch, moan, Sounds like a line in someone wannabe horror movie that comes on Saturday night on cable somewhere. But seriously. That was bad. Sorry to say...but, ...

Well, I personally don't like acrostic because they're so restricting, however, you did very well with creating a very free and flowing poem. I really like it. However, when writing ...

Well, the poem, in it's entirety, the way it was written--I didn't particulary care for. (Sorry, I'm in a real bad mood today) But the concept, the message you were ...

Well, I understand where you were going, and I can relate, but the poem itself just didn't stick to me. I mean, I read it and almost immediately I forgot ...

Sunset settling on the clouds, This was written rather beautifully, but didn't seem to be the beginning of a poem. You should probably add another line or two above it. ...

Well, first of all, I can't see how this could possibly have anything to do with rockstars having no hearts...second of all, I don't really see how this could possibly ...

"I," "Me," and "My" seemed to be used a little bit too much. Maybe you should change it to a third person...I was overwhelmed by the huge amount of times ...

welcome to yws! my name's morgan--you don't have to call me CAG or CarsandGuitars77...morgan would be fine. anyway, i'm here all the time because i'm homeschooled and i don't really ...

this poem seemed to be more like a story instead of a poem. i think it would have made a much better story than poem...