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Re: Post your own Pic thread
Wulie: are you a boy or a girl? I am very bad with guessing genders (Ask Fire Starter and EBM) Soy: OMG! You like so friggin look somebody I know...omg...if ...
Jan 24, 2005 -
Re: Listen to My Heart
Words of fire Hide what I really Want to say Sort of an awkward beginning...I don't really understand what you mean, and in songs, you have to make sure you ...
Jan 24, 2005 -
Re: You and I
Yes. The "Children Of..." line is weird. Trusting onlhy in this God, I'm sure you meant "only." Just a careless mistake, but I really liked this line. However, I agree ...
Jan 24, 2005 -
Re: YWS 2.0 Is Up And Running
well, i honestly hated the noteboard and used sub black and sub silver...i like this 1 best of all though!
Jan 24, 2005 -
Re: Listening to Your Stories
well, here's a poem of mine that doesn't make any sense. it's also in the random section, but even though it makes no sense at all, I LOVE IT...and yes, ...
Jan 22, 2005 -
Re: This Makes No SENSE at all...BUT I LOVE IT!
Earlier today, I started writing this poem and I hated it, so what I did, was I just started taking bits and pieces of it, and I mixed it up. ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: [Your wish]
Well, there was a strong amount on inconsistency since some of it rhymed and some of it didn't. I also didn't really understand the point/subject/concept. Meh...maybe it's just me.
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: pip's song
Well, I didn't really feel a connection between most the lines, they just seemed like a combination of phrases.
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: MARY - MAY OFFEND (Over 13 for language)
Well, the idea of the poem itself was interesting. It was definitely one that kept me reading. However, somethings about it were annoying: 1. The use of "Cuz," I personally ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Blue Lights (lyrics) (over 13)
Wow...this was really good. A lot of times when reading lyrics, they can be very redundant, but these weren't at all. It was fun to read. I liked it. :Two ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Three People and Falling Stars
Well, it was rather lengthy and I think it would have been better in the Narrative Poetry section. Anyway, I really liked it, but there was one thing--you didn't use ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Can't Always Depend on Me
I can’t stay right beside you all the way, I have to leave you now, Sorry, but you can’t always depend on me. I was there in the beginning before ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Oh Gray Threads!
I don't think I've ever read anything like this before. It's very different--and i loved it! I just wish I could write like this.
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Linkin Park Turned Sideways
I have to say I admire Linkin' Park for their donations to the tsunami victims... You said it like it's something no one else did. Oh sorry, wasn't supposed to ...
Jan 21, 2005 -
Re: Howdy
ZZAP: OKay, I wasn't going to say anything at first, but it's killing me: 'Resine' is wrong--it's RESIGN!!! Sorry, but I just had to do that.
Jan 21, 2005
