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I believe this would make a great book.

This reminds me of something that I wrote. I'm not sure if that's a compliment or not but I love the opening stanza/line/whatnot. Mostly because well, it seems true. It ...

I agree with Jack..."bruises" was a bit blunt. However, I really loved the poem...I actually thought it picked up when you got to the last stanza, except for this part: ...

The Ghost of Kilburne Heights Morgan Harper April 15, 2006 Verse One ghosts don't really talk they've got nothing to say ghosts walk very slow so to find their way ...

Nate: Thank you so much for the critiquing, I'm really influenced to edit it now. And the thing about the football players...well, I guess I should take it out because, ...

Well, for whatever reason, this computer won't let me take this test but, I'm 100 WPM... no mistakes.

Thanks, Fontroy...you're right, I should try to get it in a newspaper. But I seriously have to work on it..I didn't realize how many errors such as run-on sentences and ...

(continued) So just think about it before you make your kid get off Myspace as soon as you see or hear of a problem. Think about what your father did ...

This is an article I wrote for parents who feel that their kids need to get off Myspace. I might have to post in parts considering how slow my computer ...

Like David said (GOSH...there are so many new people here), the "mean" was a bit redundant. I would suggest changing it to just: "And end up saying something that I ...

Yeah, it's hard after I've been writing songs for so long to write poetry because the rhyming scheme (when you're trying to rhyme, of course) is really hard and you ...

Les Miserables by Victor Hugo I read it when I was younger and I didn't really get it, though I really enjoyed it...but I'm hoping now, being 16 I'll have ...

Areida: Hah yeah, I think I did lose some weight but it wasn't intentionally..I suddenly became a picky eater and most of what I eat these days is cereal! Emotion_less ...

"Sweet fountain splashing him He lip-folds me into corners Lashing, cat-like (tire like) This is anger Burned within his chest plate A knight in shining armor And a kingly second-rate" ...