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HM...I didn't understand this poem at all...however, I liked that. It reminds me of this poem I wrote called Helen's Lane. Very good. From the title to the last stanza, ...

Eight years old? Heck, wish I could say my stuff that long ago looked like this. Anyway, this was very inviting...from the beginning to the end. It's consistency carried out ...

I wanted to see how far half a tank of gas would get me Hm...that sounds familiar...:looks around...stops at brad: The concept, is very favorable. I loved that. However, I'm ...

thanks a lot...even though he made me not give him the credit, brad (incadescence) is the one that rephrased it,lol.

I'll go I'll leave Standing out side the window looking in Longing to be on the other side This was the most--if not the only enjoyable part of the whole ...

Hey thanx, but my work is no way NEAR as good as yours. Im glad you liked it Im normally rubbish at poems. OMG...I am flattered...you made my day! :lol: ...

Well, I really truly loved the first scene. It was very interesting and I could relate. However, the story seemed to drop dead once it got to the scene with ...

well, i honestly thought i already commented on this...i guess this i havent then... anyway, i liked it even though it was kind of lengthy and dragged on a bit. ...

Well, first of all, this poem is indeed cliche to the max, the title itself gives that away. Inside I died a million times for you Oh wow. I loved ...

Well, I read your song and it was amazing. I don't really like this one as much because it's depressing, cliche, and the whole shebang. I really liked your song ...

Lol. I really liked this, even though I'm not sure what was the chorus, verse, bridge, etc. Also, the title was er...yyyeah. However, I don't think there needs to be ...

I don't know anything else to say other than WOW. That was amazing.

‘Mind’ she muttered. ‘Mind!’ she called louder. I really liked the poem until this. Did you mean, "Mine?" But even if you had, it doesn't really fit with the type ...

*AsN: This was finished at 2am by Morgan and I. It's a duet, of sorts. It was 3am for me I think.

hm...i thought i commented on this earlier...i guess it didn't go through. but anyway, i must admit i was impressed by the amount of words you found that ended in ...