Chevy

It's amazing at how creative you were when speaking of something so small as a butterfly. I'm not one for nature or animals ('cept for dogs of course) but this ...

lol. thanks a lot niteowl..but yeah, that's what i meant.

I never really read this poem I don't think...but it really rocks because it's about a guitar...

To tell you the truth, this didn't really seemed to be broken up to me at all. I guess because it seemed so much like a short story, which was ...

i don't know where to start... ... ... ... ... perhaps i'll end it here.

Most of this poem was based on a true story/true stories...mostly of my own...I'm from California and I've spent summers there and when summers over, sadly, you must go back. ...

Oh, and I'll take some of that stuff that you put bascardis in...i can't pronounce it...but my parents won't let me drink it...meh...I'll just settle for coffee--which I'm not allowed ...

Yay, Jack! You did it! I told you you wouldn't sound conceited!!! Well, anyway, congrats!!! :lol:

well, this isn't really my style...maybe i'm just not cut out for lyric poetry. : shrugs : that's probably what it is. but that's strange though...considering if you go back ...

i agree with jack. it's not really my style either but even though it's sort of repetitive, i still sort of like it.

I'll have to disagree with EBM...this is quite the dramatic. Probably one of the best dramatic things I've ever read, really. My dramatic stuff can't touch this,lol. GO WHITNEY!!!

: Scratches head : I can't find anything to say about this poem except for: WOW

I really like this...I just think the this should have gone in the Lyric section. Also, the title and the first line are sort of sappy.

The beginning, especially the first line sounded sort of well, I don't think there's any other word for it except for "lame." However, the rest of the poem is very ...

Well, this is a good poem--as far as the people you are speaking of are concerned. I personally, was able to enjoy considering you've told me a lot about these ...