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Well, it's really good...you should definitely do it again ;)

Sureal is gorgeous Emma! You've grown up so much...I love your hair Jack: You've changed a lot too...I love your hair as well :) This is the most recent picture ...

I started college a few weeks back and it's really really taking up a lot of time. The only thing I really do online these days is school-related. I do ...

Reams of papers, covered in darkling texts, they scream. Shouldn't there have been a semi-colon after "texts?" Compared to some of your other recent works, I would have to say ...

A cliche topic but not at all cliche in the way it was written A few dead spots here and there but enough good material to make up for it. ...

I love the way this was written but it was kind of vague. I think if I understood what it was about I would have enjoyed it twice as much. ...

I love the imagery here...especially concerning the I-10 since it's something I can relate to. Overall, I agree with wasn't whiny at all. And were you trying to rhyme rest, ...

Wow, this is very different. I really enjoyed this aside from all the "just a little bits" at the end...kind of drove me crazy a bit. But other than that, ...

To everyone: Everything you all have said is so incredibly true. I'm so thankful for your criticism. Originally, this was a song. I pulled it apart and put it back ...

I've found that the second hand fell from time to the missing person and that one girl remembering everything about him that made the world pause for anything that could ...

I really like the characters. Very real like.

The only problem I had with this...between Chapter One and Two is some of the one-word dialogue was somewhat blunt. And for me, it made it hard to follow at ...

Hey thanks Niteowl.. Side note: Wow! I didn't know you were 16! when did this happen? I didn't mean to seperate the first verse like that. I guess I accidentally ...

When I first started reading it, I was like "Oh God, here we go." But once you got to the dialogue I was immediately pulled in. I'm not sutre what ...

Yes, please stay away from the cliches. And don't be afraid to get out of the box...this was very restricting. Don't go by what some book or poem you read ...