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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Man's New Best Friend

    His blue eyes widened as he looked across the booth at the black and white figure standing on the shelf. It was sitting on the shelf all alone. ‘It needed ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Daddy, Where Are You?

    This poem was very deep and I could feel the emotion in the writing. The word choice and sentence structure worked well with the poem. The only part I thought ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Amazement

    She is a magician who leaves her audience in awe at her performance. With spectacles like no other that are indescribable with words. She lives simply and nothing around her ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Perfection

    This was very interesting and a touching story!!! I loved it! :) They paragraph about his sickness needs to be a little clearer and possibly add some more detail to ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Hunted ch. 1

    This story is really interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :) There were some sentences with words that needed to capitalized. It's still really good and ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: One Step Closer Chapter 1 part 1

    This story is really interesting and a really clever idea. There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Also there were some words that might have been mistyped in it ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lucy

    Trapped in the confounds of the small room, he felt like an animal. He could hear the sound of foot steps approaching. “Mr. Douglas,” said the nurse standing at the ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane

    I love the story! The format feels like it is an actual journal. There were a couple times the word usage and sentence structure didn't flow well. "I never knew ...

    Jun 17, 2011


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