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OK, thanks for the review!!! I will try to change some things!!!

But that doesn't rhyme lol. Anyways maybe ill rewrite it with more details. Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll just write it like a story instead of a ...

Thank you for the comment!!! The emotion in this story was from a year ago so I don't feel the same anymore (it was a bit hard to capture that ...

This is my first ever poem (besides the few for my English assignments) thank you for reading please go easy one me. I wrote this after some stuff happened to ...

Yumi acting like that one best friend rn XD

OK thank you!!! I will!!!

Thank you for this review!!! I now see I didn't make this clear enough but Karim didn't die, he was just injured very severely, also Jonah not dying is a ...

Oh OK, well than that's very unique and cool!!!

No that's not what I meant lol. It's not the amount of lines, that part's fine, I meant like the new lines like this. When you press ENTER

This is the first part of the Paradise novel...sorry it's so long lol

OK I'll keep that in mind for future reviews!!! Thank you!!!

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Extremely action packed story, filled with excitement. I notice that you need to work on your capitalization. Throughout the story you say names of places, these should be capitalized e.g. ...

Wow, what a read. I love how you wrote Rosaline's perspective on the events, it was very clever. The story was quite detailed and it was a very interesting read. ...

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Wow, what a read. I love how you wrote Rosaline's perspective on the events, it was very clever. The story was quite detailed and it was a very interesting read. ...

Wow. What a read. I don't know what to say. OK let's see. I don't even know what to say. There's no grammar mistakes and it's written so well. If ...